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An Ignored Smile
Contributed by
funkdoob
on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:35:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The girl caught the cab on the
Rainy summer day
She watched the droplets
Of water
Race down the windows
And reflect the yellow
Taxicabs
Color
She rode it to the corner
Of 9th and
10th
And paid the man his
Worthy dues
She was coming home
From the funeral of a
Man
She did not know
Thats why her house stood
Dry
In the rain storm
Thats why the sunshine
Warmed her back
Everywhere
She went
She smiled at the homeless
And
Talked to the solicitors
She rode the ocean waves
And
Built sand castles on the hot beach
She was an image
Of morality
Sent from god
But it seems that
Nobody
Caught on
Copyright ©
funkdoob
... [
2004-08-20 20:35:04]
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Re: An Ignored Smile
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:41:18 PM AEST
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| great write. very true. |
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Re: An Ignored Smile
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:13:44 PM AEST
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Another great write......
Jenni |
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Re: An Ignored Smile
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:56:57 PM AEST
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i saw that u commented on my poem so i decided to read some of your poems....this is a great write...good job
Lots Of Love
CrimsonTears |
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