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Guilt's Destruction
Contributed by
lizabeth283
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:42:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I had it once
That light divine
So bright and pure
My soul did shine
But each year that passed
The light grew dimmer
Twenty-one years later
Theres barely a glimmer
A good person I am
But thats not what I seek
Perfections my goal
And havoc it wreaks
Because it is something
Ill never attain
Im always let down
Again and again
Consumed by guilt
From imperfections past
I wonder each day
How long this torment will last
Squelching my spirit
Engulfing my thoughts
Making me tired
Of this battle long fought
The answer is simple
Staring me in the face
The way to find joy
In this mortal place
Forgiving myself
Of all that I did
Accepting my faults
That for years I hid
Just trying my best
To do what is right
And then someday regaining
That heavenly light
Copyright ©
lizabeth283
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2004-08-20 21:42:48]
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:01:45 PM AEST
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| superb write. i didnt read your first version but i love this one. =] |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by waos on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:01:50 PM AEST
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| ya that's good and really true, guilt is a horrible thing |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by thumper on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:16:35 PM AEST
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I really appreciate this poem. Good write and read. Guilt is a powerful thing. :o)
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by XPoeticChicX on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:33:09 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful :) |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:20:28 PM AEST
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Guilt is one of the more powerful emotions, and do as much damage as love and hate twisting the insides and scarring the soul.
You made a good job of this tricky subject.
Awesome write, I havent read the first, but this I liked.
Keep it up. |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:42:25 AM AEST
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this hits me deep... I don't know what to say but I can definitely relate to the pain you express in this piece a wonderful job indeed.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:59:06 PM AEST
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wow this is wonderful...we must accept our faults, but its a hard thing to do...
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: Guilt's Destruction
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:50:38 PM AEST
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The heavy burden and feelings that guilt puts on us shines clearly here through your poem, which I found very enjoyable to read. Kudos to you, and keep on writing. :)
~Ave |
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