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IN A DREAM
Contributed by
the_route
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:13:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I`m in a dream where i can`t break free,
I`m in a world that doesn`t belong to me.
I`m in a place that no - longer exists,
I`m in a prison where you are missed.
I run away from my thoughts and dreams,
All i can say is this poem means.
I can`t explain my love for you,
All i can say is that it is true.
D.M.ALLUM
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the_route
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2004-08-21 08:13:56]
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Re: IN A DREAM
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:37:58 PM AEST
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It exposes the realm of 'separateness' very well, I think. Its about a break up - that much I get, and although the last lines are a little weak in context to the 'dream' theme, they are noteworthy in their descriptive nature...
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Re: IN A DREAM
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:56:56 PM AEST
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| This is such a sweet write. |
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