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So Wrong
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:40:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I've done wrong, I know
So many things to repent.
Am I really that bad, though?
Or just some lost soul?
I know that I hurt you
and
I am sorry. I am guilty...born in blood and cleansed so unevenly.
So wrong,was I
to decieve you.
Please,
kiss the raindrops again
and stop the hurting
because I can no longer breathe.
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Inevitable
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2004-08-21 11:40:51]
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Re: So Wrong
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:18:03 PM AEST
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| Well done , i feel the remorse through this poem. |
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Re: So Wrong
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:35:25 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. some things are unforgivable but we must accept that. this write shows much emotion and was written well. good luck. |
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