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What a mess!!!!!
Contributed by
Puppy
on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I have been away,
For just one day,
What can i say.
What a mess!!
The house is a mess,
Can i ever get a rest,
Where is Tess.
What a mess!!
I have to clean the doors,
And mop the floors,
This is such a bore.
What a mess!!
I want to have fun,
It is such a bum,
Iam so glum.
What a mess!!
If only the boys would pick up there toys,
If only the girls would pick up tidy there curls.
What a mess!!
When i stretch my back,
I want to hit the sack,
'cos iam wacked!!!!!!!!!!
What a mess!!
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Puppy
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2004-08-21 12:14:57]
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Re: What a mess!!!!!
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:23:45 PM AEST
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| very good write even though some of these rhymes were forced. keep up the excellent work. =] |
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Re: What a mess!!!!!
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by buchi on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:05:02 PM AEST
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| Wonderful rhyming and the message has clarity..good poem...keep it coming... |
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