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Wounded Beauty
Contributed by
carebear
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:19:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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any mistakes are mine alone....
Sweet bliss of love I felt is gone
Hurting of the bitterness
Licking my wounds
I can't forget you.
How you kissed my lips
When you looked at within me
The way your smile melted my heart
How our hands came together.
Words cruel stab my soul
Unforgotten memories I can't control
Haunting feelings I can't run
Why'd we come undone?
I fight to sleep, never does it come
Weeping silently darkness all around
I want to erase you from my mind
Love won't be the same.
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2004-08-21 13:19:05]
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Re: Wounded Beauty
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by pixie on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:38:16 PM AEST
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this is a very emotional write, there is nothing more painful than losing a loved one, the heartache will feel unbearable , but everyday that you wake up, you are becoming stronger .....this write was amazingly written and could have only been done so in such a ay by someone with first hand experience of this subject... for that I am sorry *hugs*
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