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A Battle Seen Through The Eyes Of Us All
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:50:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Look up at me Let me see your eyes through mine Tears or none Sadness is shown A fear of unforgiving thoughts A mind is crying out for help To many questions Go unanswered To much anger and hate that cant be let out A shadow lost long ago A heart that no longer cares The beast within cannot breathe He will catch a breath And breathe again Let himself out And destroy once more Through the eyes of the innocent The eyes of the sad and lonely He will speak out And let you know To destroy what was once great To rid yourself of peace And bring back the anger that was once taking over you Taking over your mind But happiness and peace had won you over It took over your mind Took over the anger and hate That had conquered your soul for so long But it will return It always does A never-ending battle Between the good and the evil That inhabit all of us
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Re: A Battle Seen Through The Eyes Of Us All
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:04:37 PM AEST (User
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totally true, i thought you did a good job expressing what that's like in all of us. |
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Re: A Battle Seen Through The Eyes Of Us All
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:18:33 PM AEST (User
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This was very written here..I am glad I found it..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: A Battle Seen Through The Eyes Of Us All
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 04:07:43 AM AEST (User
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A masterpeice of wisdom.
Great job.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Battle Seen Through The Eyes Of Us All
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:16:15 PM AEST (User
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Wow. Good write. But you know, the poem sounded better coming out of my mouth than your username did lol. :-) |
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Re: A Battle Seen Through The Eyes Of Us All
(User Rating: 1 ) by snookams on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:20:33 PM AEST (User
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i used to write alot like this, you can still see it in some of my poems. i enjoyed reading this poem an aweful lot, you portray your emotions like a painted picture. thankyou for sharing such a wonderful peace of art with us all |
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