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If You Were To Leave Me
Contributed by
MisterRight
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If you were to leave me
Id have no more to give
My life would go on
But I couldnt live
If you were to leave me
My heart would cry
No more happiness
Or hope in my eyes
If you were to leave me
Id be numb from the pain
My only dream gone
Only emptiness would remain
If you were to leave me
My love would leave too
Never to be given to another
Left to perish without you
If you were to leave me
My life would be empty
Left here in shambles
No chance to save me
If you were to leave me
Thered be no reason to push on
Living my days in darkness
My only inspiration gone
If you were to leave me
Id be forever alone
Hiding myself away
With memories of love Id known
If you were to leave me
My future would be dark
No more light in my life
Not so much as a spark
If you were to leave me
My heart would grow cold
Never again from my lips
Will the words, I love you, be told
But if you were to leave me
Id wish you happiness and love
And Id tell you before you left
You are all Ill ever dream of
Copyright ©
MisterRight
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2002-11-02 15:45:00]
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by OreO on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful
Just beautiful
i need more kleenex
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 04:37:12 PM AEST
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Awwww... so sweet...and sincere.....
But Dolphin, don't you know I care...
I don't ever want to see you blue......
Know that I'll never leave you....
Hey Curtis, great write... I think this is just beautiful......
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:13:43 PM AEST
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Wow this is a simply beautiful poem. I am awe struck.
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by orgygirl on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 07:29:41 AM AEST
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There isn't more to say that hasn't already been said. Very lovely write.
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:36:21 PM AEST
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your gifted and you use it well.
Poem is beautiful! |
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 08:43:21 PM AEST
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~very great poem
you got a great talent for it
keep them comin!!!!!!!!!!!~
~ britteny~ |
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Re: If You Were To Leave Me
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by princesspurty on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:19:40 PM AEST
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| very beautiful and sad, but it shows how much love you have for her, very well said indeed |
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