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Dead Buildings

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:14:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Haiku

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Re: Dead Buildings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:33:46 PM AEST
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Geez....I know I'm gonna get cussed out here..but how about something like this--->

Dead buildings sit here
Masking spirits all alone
Dancing in shadows.

5-7-5 ain't all that hard....
Jenni

Re: Dead Buildings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:11:04 PM AEST
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This is NOT a haiku, no matter how often you call it that. The rule is, 5-7-5 and even for you cannot be changed. It is a short poem, ONLY.

Re: Dead Buildings (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:15:11 PM AEST
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Rules, schmooles...
Who gives a **** anymore.

It's a DeadRecky Haiku, and that's why it's
too cool.
--Mothy

Re: Dead Buildings (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:33:58 PM AEST
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i agree with jenni and rita. great concept though.

Re: Dead Buildings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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lol. uptight girls, they be livin' in an uptight world . . .

I like this, even though its got a weird structure.

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