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Damaged
Contributed by
rockshv
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:42:49 PM in AEST
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How do you look at me
When you come around
Use your hand
Dont speak a sound
Am I the girl
You wanted to love
Or the bait
That conceives you blood?
Your selfish plagues
Are designed like the rest
Only wanting what is good
Rubbing tightly against my chest
I am your target
Because I look weak
Ive always been quiet
You think I wont speak
Take advantage now
Been used as your prey
Damage has been done
In the worst thinkable way
Copyright ©
rockshv
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2002-11-02 18:42:49]
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Re: Damaged
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 09:31:36 PM AEST
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Oh God rockshv,
this is so painful> how dare anyone treat you like this.
It is when I read something like this that I start to question, Is there a God?
too many of the kids I work with on the street and in institutions are so damaged.
I am so sorry you have been so hurt.
I pray for retribution.
Warmest regards,
Fwog |
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Re: Damaged
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:05:19 AM AEST
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I understand,Ive had men that treated me like this & I learned long ago I'm not letting them walk all over me,You have to get tough!!!!Take care!
Christina |
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Re: Damaged
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by orgygirl on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 08:02:44 AM AEST
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Im very sorry for what happened but looking on the bright side a very good poem came from it.
Take care
R |
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Re: Damaged
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:09:02 AM AEST
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So painful to read...I can only imagine how hard it was to write..and to actually face... I'm so sorry for your hurt...and hope things are much brighter now..
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