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Sadness
Contributed by
Aika
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:28:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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you rain the tears on my cheeks
so cover me with misty veil
let no sunshine difuses
take, what you gave
red smudges of blood
covering robe of webs
and blue of my eyes
in grey dust was changed
Let me sleep in leaves
Autumn will appease my thirst
In spring i might find out
I dont want to sleep
Let the snow cover me
His white might hide
The black shadow over me
And I return to life
Pr mi slzy na tvře,
Zvojem mlnm mě zahal
Nechť nepronikne slunka zře
Vem si, cos mi dal
rud skvrny ze srdce
překryj z pavučin at
a z oč modře
zbyl ed prach
nechej mě usnout v list
podzim ukonej můj hlad
na jaře mon zjistm,
e nechci znovu spt
nechej na mě padnout snh
jeho bělost snad
překryje můj čern stn
a j oiju zas.
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-08-22 08:28:53]
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Re: Sadness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:46:18 AM AEST
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| what I could understand was quite deep and moving. Well expressded and full of sadness, your goal that you set out to say was accomplished this augustine day |
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Re: Sadness
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:31:11 AM AEST
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So sad aika, you are really retreating into yourself with this one.
I hope you return to the full glow of your sparkling life soon, a life that has touched and will touch so many
Steve |
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Re: Sadness
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:50:55 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwwwyes Dear Aika Baby.....I too love the snow........a white covering to cleanse every soul............also in the winter I feel so protected by its covering...perhaps because no one can reach me......or is it because I can't get out to reach others? Whatever it may be......I loved this poem so much......it's was so like you.......but then I could relate.....it was so like me too!
Lovely!
conniemom |
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