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the note
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:42:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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now ur gone what do i do
do i sit wait for you
i know your gone
but your still here
i read the note
counted my tears
"you were the only one that took the fall
the only one who risked it all
then i went away and you lost evrything and i,m so sorry"
20 days have passed since you slipped away
and those words on my heart are ingraved
this pain is unbarable with out you here
i want to be up there or where ever you are
you loved me in your own way mum
but i guess it was hard to show
you took your life ast the cost of others
this orld is cruel to you i owe
everything
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2004-08-22 09:42:44]
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Re: the note
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:56:24 AM AEST
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It seems as though you wrote this on the spur of a very angry / confused moment, as its emotionally raw and . . . worthy of comment.
My Condolences and appreciation.
Keep writing. |
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Re: the note
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:34:08 AM AEST
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Wow grip, really strong stuff. love how deep your words are.. I am becoming quite a fan..will check out the reast of your stuff now
Thanks for sharing
Kell x |
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