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I Told Myself
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:42:51 AM in AEST
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I told myself again and again I never cared nor gave a damn.
But why is it there this feel of chagrin even when I've long recovered the pain.
Too long now since twilight's fall the setting sun have left no dawn.
From empty aisles in abandoned malls echoes still sing but the melodies are gone.
Anchored beyond once azure skies lies the broken remains of lost horizons.
Once decked and followed by nimble suitors now lost forever manicured in gloom.
In whatever form by whichever route this forgotten tale must perhaps be told.
In the flowering of time the blooming of days what remains of hope might somehow still dream.
For even in darkness perhaps I still wish to awaken once more in the light of the day.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-08-22 09:42:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Told Myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alina on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:25:55 AM AEST (User
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Absolutely WONDERFUL !! This poem made me think what it would be like if I had never turned to drugs. My life would be so much different!!( If only I could "wake up in the light")
Great Write!! Keep Up the Good work!!
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Re: I Told Myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:46:58 AM AEST (User
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Just start walking toward life, one step at a time, never looking back at the past, as it cannot now or ever be changed. Only today and the future can be made to your liking. Walk forward, Baronhawk.
Rita |
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