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Haunting Dreams
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:52:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silver metal coating my eyes,
Rolling back into my head,
Shedding tears of solid pain,
Always mixed with satanic red.
World normally quit and bleak,
only two people can i see,
I'm the one who decides to speak,
but you have more to say.
Confusion present each night,
severities night shade with me,
constant stabbings made of cotton,
caused by your limit of conscience.
White fabric covers my windpipe,
slowing my speach and answers,
giving me time to remember what i have to say,
ripping the threads with raw hatred.
Lonely colours fills my eyes,
i know your speechless,
People asking for my size,
coffins or course black.
Chinese caligraphy littering the walls of my mind,
My name printed thickly in black,
Splatters of red cover the fresh ink,
my own blood is on the knife.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-08-22 15:52:08]
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Re: Haunting Dreams
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by Whisper on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:17:12 AM AEST
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I am just wondering what your outside life is like. Your words are shrilling and pungent and filled with pain to me. I pray you find release by letting it go on paper and throwing them away.
God Bless
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Re: Haunting Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:57:20 AM AEST
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Truely, beautifyl words, they are raw and yet oddly soft, like the one that would speak them would be quiet. It's a lonely poem, full of feeling. I also hope you transfer your emotions like this onto paper, thats what I do, but they are not quite so painful words, please, I do hope you find some consolence in your poetry.
Peace and Kumquats With Love,
E. Raven
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Re: Haunting Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 10:05:34 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem! Great Job! |
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