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we were junebugs again
Contributed by
Gabriel
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 07:45:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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and i
remember, those
sweet [summer]
nights; we were
junebugs again.
that crescendo
of waves, lapped
up by the bay, was
illuminated by
our flight.
each carrying
a [whispered] tale
of its prime; and,
they were wed
there by the
beach.
and dawn
brought an end to
the tide (to our
flight); but, oh!
if you could've
seen.
Copyright ©
Gabriel
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2004-08-22 19:45:48]
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Re: we were junebugs again
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:45:28 AM AEST
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artistic, the way poety should be. You strike me as being quite the diverse writer, I like that. Keep it up.
This is deffinetly one of the better poems I have read in a long time. |
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