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Fog
Contributed by
ps_ihateyou
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:21:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She can't see
Her vision is blurred
Running from her past,
Nothing makes sense anymore
The sky is painted blood red
And a thick fog is rising in the distance
She slowly edges closer and closer
And with each step, the fog gets thicker and thicker
Unable to breathe,
She gasps desperately for air
And tries so hard not to let it take over,
Each breath getting heavier and heavier
Until she breaks, and the fog consumes her
Leaving nothing but lost hope and fallen dreams
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ps_ihateyou
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2004-08-22 21:21:13]
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Re: Fog
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:22:22 PM AEST
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I like this. Nice write.
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