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behind my smile
Contributed by
lanna047
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:07:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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can't you see behind my smile
that my world is on its head?
I'm learning to live without you
but surely you see in my eyes the frown
there's so much I need to say
but the words just won't come out
'cause I'm sure you don't want to hear them
or be reminded of what we were
I feel deceived, my trust betrayed
having existed in what was a lie
and all I want to do is forget
everything that is good about you
what do you think when you think of me
or do you even think of me at all?
have you banished all the memories
back behind some concrete walls?
it's easier for you to move on
for it was you who ran away
or maybe it was more like
you pushing me out of a speeding train
you got what you wanted
I hope you're happy now
to know I'm torn inside
and always wanting to scream out loud
the walls constrict close and tight
I can't breathe or find my peace
why hasn't time begun to heal the pain
or has it given up on me as well?
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lanna047
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Re: behind my smile
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by artostuff on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:35:04 AM AEST
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| the end of a coupling always causes sorrow, if you want time to heal, you have to reach out for it. |
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Re: behind my smile
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:54:30 AM AEST
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its horrible when they can't see your hurting and you want them too...i know...i know it all to well....
please comment on my work too
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Re: behind my smile
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by Dibi on
Saturday, 21st May 2011 @ 08:05:59 AM AEST
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| its funny that youve writen an amazing poem, because you were hurting, i hope you keep having a crapy life, for the sake of good poetry =) |
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