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Say Something
Contributed by
theraven
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:16:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Never speaking, afraid of shedding
light on the darkness inside.
The eye of the storm, boiling
my heart; tired of these lies.
Friends forever, I promised you,
with your face cupped in my palm.
Now we're like the sun and moon;
one up and the other down.
Nothing will change, you breathed
into my ear on that clouded night.
I wasted away thinking of you,
Who was I kidding, right?
Raising memories from ashes,
I remember sitting behind you
in class; so long ago, hearing
your voice as I break down and cry.
So I'm confessing to myself that
it's over, yes, it's true.
But I'll still think about your smile;
don't worry, I'll always love you.
-The Raven-
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2004-08-23 08:16:41]
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Re: Say Something
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:43:37 AM AEST
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This is so emotional. It is tough having to move on and I hope your heart mends soon.
A very touching and moivng poem.
Kie |
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Re: Say Something
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:38:35 PM AEST
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| Very good write..You show alot of feeling here..I am liking this one alot. |
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