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The Absence of Color
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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( White is the essence of all color ~ and black ...? )
There are places that exist within my mind
Harboring the darkest of thought and malicious intent
What light that is not absorbed and tainted
Skitters and shies away, fearful of the absence of color
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Nazmythian
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2004-08-23 12:21:00]
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Re: The Absence of Color
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:41:32 PM AEST
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Neither white nor black are colors, they are both prisms for colors to come shining through. When it is dark, only the light can shine through bringing with it a rainbow of the spectrum of reality.
Nicely portrayed. Short but sensible.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: The Absence of Color
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:55:13 PM AEST
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That was so lovely
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: The Absence of Color
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by Willofree on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:08:25 PM AEST
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Sometimes succinct is much more profound. I tend to be too wordy.
Willofree
Thanks for your past feedback |
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Re: The Absence of Color
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:42:06 AM AEST
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| I know of these places in my mind. Malicious with hate in mind. Thank you for this poem, short but to the point! |
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Re: The Absence of Color
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:04:33 AM AEST
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Short, yet compelling and beautiful. I loved this piece. You have a talent, mon cher Naz. A true minstrel. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of your written thoughts. Simplicity is best. Very profound. Love it. Absolutely perfect, my friend. Much love! Forever,
Votre fleur de sang |
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