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unfamiliar face
Contributed by
allymp
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:04:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I look into a mirror
But see an unfamiliar face
I see my life is going nowhere
But I can't seem to steady out my pace
I'm making wrong decisions
I'm taking the wrong roads
But my life is so confusing
And I was never told
How to keep my life in balance
And tell the difference between wrong and right
I feel like there is no hope
And I don't think I can win this fight
I think I'll just give up
Because this life is just too hard
I don't know if I'm ready to leave
But lately I've been so off guard
So now I've made my choice
And I'll breathe my last breath
Finally the time has come
Finally I can rest...
Copyright ©
allymp
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2004-08-23 13:04:05]
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Re: unfamiliar face
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by pixie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:37:04 PM AEST
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life can be very hard, but also very rewarding for your effors, I was once where you are now, I thought there was nothing to live for, but how wrong I was, as my life now is the best it has ever been, I do still have a long way to go, but I am very glad that my last Overdose wasn't a success, as I wouldnt be here now giving you some friendly advice and a hug *hugs you*
good expression, keep going, you can do it, you may need a little help, but don't we all at time to time,
takecare
pm me if you ever need a friend,
pixie xx |
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Re: unfamiliar face
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:43:37 PM AEST
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| i getcha. i know how that feels. nice write |
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Re: unfamiliar face
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:03:33 PM AEST
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| Good piece. I really enjoy your writing. |
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Re: unfamiliar face
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by Sinned on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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Wow ! This is a good write.I think we all go through this sort of thing and it is tough.Somehow we make it.Your expression was great.Keep writing girl you have talent for words. :)
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