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insane sanity
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:39:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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laughter rings inside my head
i laugh out loud
and the women drag me away
high above,past a thousand steps
locked in the pillow room
i can hear the songs of angels
floating in my airs
i cry out
no-one hears
i scream out
no-one notices
my soul dies
no-one cares
my heart contains the key
for the sanity within me
i turn around
and the blood stained floor is soaking still
my slits wrists dripping black
the invisible knives which drive into my skin
lay splintered on the floor
the dogs of death
bare their teeth in the corner
i smile
and i shake my head
they vanish
i know how to control my gift
my dreams become reality
reality becomes my dreams
i never sleep
i live
and the corners of hell rise into the day
this insanity
is all so true
its sanity
within this insane language
...its one true being
insane sanity
bring me from the shadows forth...
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-08-23 13:39:21]
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Re: insane sanity
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by pixie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:41:20 PM AEST
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wow, that was dark, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: insane sanity
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by disillusioned on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:28:08 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem.. I really like it.. It's dark but yet there is a bit of light in it towards the end... Wonderful job! |
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Re: insane sanity
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:57:07 PM AEST
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How Hannah, I've never read your poems before, now I can see why you are going save Toilet Paper to read!!
Really bloody and dark in every way.......do you really feel this way.....or is it your style!
You have great talent! I can feel the emotions
deep inside!
Good write!
Connie Sue |
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Re: insane sanity
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:04:43 PM AEST
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lol thanks!
its kinda my style..because i get inspired by what i feel...(dark and misunderstood lol)
well thanks love to read more of urs;)
love han xx |
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Re: insane sanity
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by Alina on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:47:32 PM AEST
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Loved it !! This brought back some memories of when I was in drug rehab, There were some pretty dame pyschotic chicks when I was in rehab and this reminded me of them. Great Write !! I could see this so vivedly in my mind. I pictured a girl in a crazy house in her own white room with a sarcastic evil grin !!
Keep it Up !!
ALINA
p.s. this would have been
better under psychotic poems !! |
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Re: insane sanity
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 03:17:42 AM AEST
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woow!
i love this!
it's just beautifully powerfu!
it's amazing!!!!
i like it where you wrote...
"the dogs of death
bare their teeth in the corner
i smile
and i shake my head
they vanish"
i think tharts the best bit, with out a dought!
it shows that you and your magical gift to the extreme.
... this is totally amazing!!!!
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