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Ever wish
Contributed by
nicbagsgirl
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ever wish you would die
to end all the pain you feel inside?
Ever wish you could float away
and forget all the sorrows you faced that day?
Ever wish people could see,
All of your pain and suffering?
Ever wish they could understand
and maybe reach out to lend a ***** hand?
Ever wish you had just one friend
Just one person to care and make your pain end.
Ever wish that when you were home
That you didnt feel so damn alone.
These are the wishes I make every night,
praying my darkness will fade and I will someday see light.
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2004-08-23 14:37:19]
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Re: Ever wish
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by artostuff on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:52:04 PM AEST
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| I like this. you can almost feel yourself being drained through the lines. |
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Re: Ever wish
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by Inevitable on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:53:01 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this. I like it. |
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Re: Ever wish
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:24:58 PM AEST
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| Very nice. An all too comon wish that you have uniquely worded. |
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Re: Ever wish
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:37:39 PM AEST
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| that was good yeah, i'm sure almost everyone has wished those things at some point or another |
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