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~COULD IT BE?~
Contributed by
jv
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:42:13 PM in AEST
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COULD IT BE?
NO, I WOULD NEVER LET IT BE. . . .
BUT IT FEELS LIKE. . . .
NO, IT COULDNT POSSIBLY BE THAT.
BUT I THINK IT IS, COULD HE HAVE FOUND A PLACE IN MY HEART?
NOW IM SO CONFUSED, I DONT KNOW WHERE TO START
I THOUGHT THAT NOONE COULD EVER AGAIN GET TO WHERE HES AT.
IT WAS UNDER LOCK AND KEY AND THAT WAS THAT.
NOW HERE HE IS BEFORE ME
READY TO LOVE ME, WITH HIS ARMS OPEN WIDE
EVERY INSTINCT I HAVE TELLS ME TO TURN AROUND RUN AND HIDE
BUT THEN I STOP, . . . .THAT FEELING, THERE IT IS AGAIN. . . .PARALYZING ME. . . . .
LEAVING ME NO CHOICE BUT TO LET GO OF ALL OF THE HEARTACHE IN MY PAST
I JUST HOPE THIS TIME, WITH HIM, IT WILL LAST. ~
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:52:46 PM AEST
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aww this is so cute an at the same time revealing a painful past
thank you for both experiences
luv han xx |
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:27:42 PM AEST
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The poem is good for your first one. Keep writing and you will get better and better. But lose the caps lock please. When you do that it is like you are shouting the words at us.
Rita |
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:49:01 PM AEST
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A very good 1st attempt... keep it up... u can only get better... I'm w/ Rita loose the caps lock... it soes make it seem like ur words are being shouted to us...
~Donna~ |
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~
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by NeverSayNever on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:29:24 AM AEST
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| Great poem describes just how a lot of us feel. Its exactly how I felt when i met my girl, i dont have to hope anymore. I'm so glad i let go of my painful past |
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~
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by NeverSayNever on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:30:19 AM AEST
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| Great poem describes just how a lot of us feel. Its exactly how I felt when i met my girl, i dont have to hope anymore. I'm so glad i let go of my painful past |
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Re: ~COULD IT BE?~
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by NeverSayNever on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:30:32 AM AEST
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| Great poem describes just how a lot of us feel. Its exactly how I felt when i met my girl, i dont have to hope anymore. I'm so glad i let go of my painful past |
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