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Eyes of Death
Contributed by
Luka
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Look straight in to the eyes of death
watch life as you know it
flash before your eyes
think of your family
think of your friends
think of times you thought would never end
feel the love that covers your heart
feel the hope that blankets the sky
believe for the better
believe things will change
cheat death
then death will stare in to your eyes
as its grin of sin fades from its face
life doesn't seem like a waste
Copyright ©
Luka
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2004-08-23 16:51:00]
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Re: Eyes of Death
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:26:05 PM AEST
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| that was really good. i liked it a lot. |
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Re: Eyes of Death
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by Alina on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:34:21 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE !! Sometimes I think.... the poeple who don't want to die and LOVE life always end up dieng early........ yet people who want to die and try to commit suicide usually don't succeed. Ironic isn't ?? I used to be very suicidal....... have gone through all kinds of treatments. I came very near close to death once..... and my life did pass before my eyes. It was like an old movie strip in faded colors. I saw things that I couln'dt even remember..... and suddenly... I realized how important life actually was. Keep up the good work......
ALINA |
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