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Sinful Memory
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i've done something wrong
is that why you're gone?
i bet not for long
come'on we're strong
i know you want me
i know we can be
i'm sorry
i'm blurry
sinful memory
i did wrong i'm so sorry
am i really that blurry?
sinful memory
things have turned around
i've hit the ground
and you've been found
and i've been well found
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savedbydeath
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2004-08-23 19:21:22]
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Re: Sinful Memory
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:34:26 PM AEST
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i love how you used sinful memory in this.
"things have turned around
i've hit the ground" very nice.
hrm i have no idea about the blurry lines or the last 2 lines.... ::confuzzled:: =] |
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Re: Sinful Memory
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:03:53 PM AEST
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yo,short and sweet...just the way i like them,nice wirte
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Re: Sinful Memory
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:59:58 PM AEST
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this is great man!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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