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Dave's Poem
Contributed by
lonely_kakashi
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:37:52 PM in AEST
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In the beginning it started so well
The attraction between us, strong
Everything looked to be perfect
But oh, how I was so wrong
The chemistry was just lacking
You made affection seem a chore
But still I held on, and hoped for the best
But now I can see I needed more
Those words dont mean anything now
Anyone can say whats been said before
I used to take it as the truth
But the truth is so close and so sore
Maybe some would want what I had
As they have that which I desire
Maybe it was just all from exposure
But the jealousy burned deep like fire
And it hurt me more than you will ever know
But its too late now to put it all right
Because with more I tried to offer you
The more I lost the wounding fight
Then when it was finally all over
A chance for me to heal arose
But you denied me from any respect
And delivered your final blows
Its funny how life can rip you apart
Or make you smile, or break your heart
It makes you hurt like never before
And kicks you whilst youre on the floor
But theres one thing that is for sure
Life will go on forevermore
And bring more minds to mercys door
At the expense of those who should be so poor.
I dedicate this to he whos been through it before
And in his life, taken an unfair amount more
Dave Mesquitta / Ltqball
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Re: Dave's Poem
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:56:03 PM AEST
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I think Dave should register here at YPDC and post more and more poems. He writes, evidently, straight from the heart. I like this poem and I like his style. Practice makes perfect. I think he should practice on us.
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