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Fear of Comming Clean
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 09:22:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Living, breathing,
not yet conceiving
the effects of what she's done.
But all she wants is to cry to someone.
She crouches small to conceal the fear,
though she's petrified beyond her years.
She stares at the old crusted gashes
and a single tear falls from her lashes.
Tomorrow they'll see; tomorrow they'll know.
She'll be out in the open with no where to go.
No escape and no where to hide.
She'll be forced to go it with no guide.
She's coming clean and she will be strong.
Just grit her teeth and go along.
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Re: Fear of Comming Clean
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:02:06 PM AEST
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| That was really good and the rhymes flowed really awesome and I just thought that I could relate so .. yeah.. it was good. |
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Re: Fear of Comming Clean
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:27:33 PM AEST
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| i agree with waos. excellent write as usual =] |
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Re: Fear of Comming Clean
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:56:39 PM AEST
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| very well expressed. this was greatly done |
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Re: Fear of Comming Clean
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by Dany on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:14:21 PM AEST
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Hey... ummm... my friend told me about you,
TwEeKy.She said she gave you my name or e-mail to talk to me if you need to, so im here for u. Great poem anyway! |
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Re: Fear of Comming Clean
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by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:21:25 PM AEST
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OMG! this is one amazing peice of work!!
i loved it immensly!
awsome writ GiGi!
keep it up!
gone CrAzY, back soon.
Tweek |
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Re: Fear of Comming Clean
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by bite_me on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:11:08 AM AEST
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wow, thats really nicely written! Rhymes beautifully :)
Ella
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