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A Response to Shakespeare's Sonnet 73.
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
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Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 01:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I see you thus, my love doesn't change,
Through joy and sorry it remained the same,
Believe me, love, it's been quite a range,
And it's been an honour to have your surname.
The sun will soon set, and rise will new sorrows,
The rest of coloured leaves will soon fall,
I will miss you for the rest of my tomorrows,
And I pray to God, that He'll delay his call.
Autumn will soon be gone and winter will come,
So cold and harsh, and lonely as the sun,
In daylight the only star, we can see the light from,
Not seen again in nighttime, when its light is done.
Though death will soon seal thee up in rest,
Your love for me it will not test.
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Jessica_Saini
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2002-07-17 13:42:32]
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Re: A Response to Shakespeare's Sonnet 73.
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 02:18:31 PM AEST
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Hi Jessica,
Your rhyme scheme is right for a sonnet. e.g.
ababcdcdefefgg. I like your line: "And it's been
an honour to have your surname". Honor for your husband shines, Jessica.
Always your friend,
Laurie |
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