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flowers of love?
Contributed by
kammie
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:54:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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petals open and gaze at the sun
as my heart opens to you
prickly thorns and blessed rose stems
whilst arguements may occur
gentle shiver unto the wind
you tenderly touch me
honey bee's land and take what is needed
we give and take emotions
fragile leaves cruelly broken
something inside us snaps
final move, torn porcelain stem
my heart breaks..........
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2004-08-24 04:54:24]
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Re: flowers of love?
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:13:33 PM AEST
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That is an incredible write !! I loved it !! "...you tenderly touch me, honey bee's land and take what is needed ... " Wonderful.
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