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Love's old photograph
Contributed by
pastiche247
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:02:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She sits like a slim,
rather beautiful, Buddha
cross-legged, with hands
resting lightly, as cups;
the string at the throat of her
blouse hanging loose.
Her neck is in shadow
holding her chin in relief.
Curls fall away from her forehead,
wisps of hair framed by the
pale August sky.
Dark eyebrows curve,
echoing cheeks that
puff to her smile
as she looks, in that second,
forever away.
The strap of a watch
curls round her wrist
like a chain.
Copyright ©
pastiche247
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2004-08-24 07:02:14]
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Re: Love's old photograph
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:49:38 PM AEST
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I really like this but after a few reads cannot place the significance of the last three lines ... The words are very image forming but I just cant place the last ... help
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