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Welcome Into My World
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:01:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Welcome Night
Welcome Friend
Welcome Darkness
The hunt begins
Into Night
Into Dread
Into Darkness
You will be bled
My first Night
My first Kiss
My first Darkness
It was such bliss
World of Night
World of Red
World of Darkness
You are now undead
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2004-08-24 13:01:10]
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Re: Welcome Into My World
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:02:44 PM AEST
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good write
pixie xx |
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Re: Welcome Into My World
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:34:38 PM AEST
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Beautiful poet, devine friend.... This world that you exist in is very dark ad morbid. But I love it. I wish to live in it with you, but I now realize that I am in your world... Foreboding, dreary, and yet, sensual... You describe the life of a vampire so movingly, it's as if you actually are one. Scary, but a big plus for me! As I have stated before, I am extremely obssessed about these entrancing creatures of the Night... You seem to satisfy my hunger for them. Exellent flow and words. Standing ovation!!! I felt myself gradually succomb to you, wanting desperately to become a child of the Shadows. But the poem ended, and I came out of my trance and was thrown back into this heedless world... Enthralling write! Please write more!! A desperate plea from a disturbed girl! I thank you! All my love! Forever,
Your dearest fleur |
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Re: Welcome Into My World
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by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:21:57 AM AEST
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| Interesting write. |
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Re: Welcome Into My World
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:01:58 PM AEST
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I wish to thank you for reading this particular piece. I was attempting to try some thing different and came up with this. It is probably my personal least favorite, and I almost feel as though I should apologize to all who read it instead.
Nazmythian ~
( thinks he will do just that ) I'm Sorry !! |
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Re: Welcome Into My World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 10:46:48 PM AEST
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| Definitely interesting. flows good and has strong meaning. nice job |
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