|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
late night thoughts
Contributed by
suzie007uk
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:25:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
LATE NIGHT THOUGHTS
Tonight I was alone
The children fast asleep
Thoughts inside my head
I wanted to bury deep
Memories from the past
I tried to push away
No matter how hard I tried
They would not go away
Again I tried to distract
My mind on other things
But looking through the tears
Sadness it did bring
I tried to be so strong
I tried to then let go
But every time I turned my head
Id feel a little low
At night I think like this
I think of all the pain
Wondering whether tomorrow
Will repeat itself again
SUZIE
24/01/04
Copyright ©
suzie007uk
... [
2004-08-24 17:25:44]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: late night thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:35:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very sad write, you have expressed this well, with great flow, everything comes out to haunt you at night, my late night thoughts have kept me awake many a night *hugs you*
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: late night thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:02:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A very good poem here doll...Good job.
AfterDark.. |
|
|
Re: late night thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:03:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nice write that. I like your choice of words
to keep the flow of the write going til the end. Nice work.
Whisper |
|
|
Re: late night thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:10:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I really like this.
Many of what I've written have been the result of sleepless nights. I think it's because it's when we are most alone.
Great write! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
