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Back Again
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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She sat alone and sad one day
And through tear filled eyes
and lost feelings growing.
Through a frosted window
Whispering voices she did hear
Their haunting Laughter ,
creeping through the small cracks in the pane.
Voices telling her it's OK
Figthing off the urges
She gives her head a shake
and asks herself again.
Crying to be heard.
Where are the moments gone?
And do I wish to have them back again?
Whisper
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Whisper
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2004-08-24 20:30:00]
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Re: Back Again
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:27:25 PM AEST
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| I really had to think about this poem. Do we really want lost time back? In my thoughts I decided it was best to let they stay lost. It is probably different for others but it seems that if they were lost there was probabaly a reason for that occurrence. Somethings are better lost and/or forgotten. : ) Rita |
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Re: Back Again
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:48:40 AM AEST
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Where are the moments gone?
And do I wish to have them back again?
Good poem, definitely food for thought these last two lines. well done.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Back Again
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:55:22 AM AEST
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*hugs* a very sad and pained write straight from your heart..
pixie xx |
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