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Hey Kiddo

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:50:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



As this needle breaks the skin
To inject some oxygen
I remember
God I remember

How you looked at me
When I told you the truth
You didnt care, you didnt hear
What I said to you

Hey kiddo are you givin up
Hey kiddo dont you give a ****
That Im fading away
And Im fading away

As this needle breaks the skin
To inject some oxygen
I remember
God I remember
I love you for being you

My aspirations are asthmatic
As they struggle to breathe
But all this pain in my veins means nothing
If youre not here with me

Hey kiddo are you givin up
Hey kiddo dont you give a ****
That Im fading away
And Im fading away

As this needle breaks the skin
To inject some oxygen
I remember
God I remember
I love you for being you

When you wake up tomorrow
With him by your side
I just want you to know kiddo
For you
I died here tonight




Copyright © paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-08-25 00:50:34]
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Re: Hey Kiddo (User Rating: 1 )
by sheri on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:51:57 AM AEST
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Wow, this an incredible poem. I hope to read more of your poems in the future.


Re: Hey Kiddo (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:35:57 AM AEST
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Very sad and powerful. I want to read more from you.
Blu


Re: Hey Kiddo (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:50:38 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Sad, and moving.


Re: Hey Kiddo (User Rating: 1 )
by SkaterGirl16 on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:55:59 PM AEST
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Aww... I love this. Its well written, and full of emotion. Sad though...




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