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When we had our first touch
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:56:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Who could have imagined a more perfect day,
For all the words I could ever say,
They drift off into the distance of the sky,
Im so happy I no longer want to die!
Just laying on the beach, with you,
You gave me a smile and stopped me feeling blue.
Happiness is something I almost thought had vanished,
I didnt realise how much it could truly be missed.
I finally got my hug, well even more,
Makes me love and adore you even more,
When it came to saying bye,
It was so hard, oh but why,
I wanted to come with you, but had to stay,
All I want is another day,
Yet I had to say bye,
Oh but why.
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Re: When we had our first touch
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:46:35 AM AEST
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Awwww this is such a beautiful write :) I am so glad that you have found love, you deserve it, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: When we had our first touch
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by Snapz on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 10:49:29 AM AEST
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| Hey huni we'll have another day soon, love u. Oh the saying bye is getting harder. |
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