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The bumblebee poem
Contributed by
MsScissors
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:56:30 AM in AEST
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His quick tongue penetrated flesh
like a jewel glistened morning brags.
His mixed remembrances were hung, a sash
in stony gardens, laying eggs.
and dappled heady ecstasy
lay, reason for bereavement.
and light left, lost or fancied
described his bodies scent.
kissed her soul and then her legs
His words thick dappled, dripped.
a remedy for old songs and sags
she caught her light, refracting, stitched
she shivered in agreement
and remembered then precisely
a hard, unbreaking, filament
and he, bumblebee and starry.
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2004-08-25 03:56:30]
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Re: The bumblebee poem
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by artostuff on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:16:17 AM AEST
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I like this. True to its name it is a bublebees' poem. Wonderful imagery,
"His mixed remembrances were hug, a sash in stony gardens, lay eggs".
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing |
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Re: The bumblebee poem
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by Solnubis on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:21:15 PM AEST
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| This was very well written. I wish I could come up with words like yours sometimes i feel i use the same ones over and over again. I want my words to have a double meaning to it though is some of my peotry I have done this. I just liked how you use the words to describe what the bumblebee was doing. Though at times it reminded me of intimancy between two people. |
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