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Hidden Unknown Message
Contributed by
all4him
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 07:25:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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blown away
by something unknown
floating in the clouds of heaven
from the echo of a face
to the gentle touch of unknown hands
A hoping sensation.
Longing for those unknown lips.
to feel these things combinded
the heart beats
the blood rushes
wanting to explode
the joy inside also unknown
lasting and ending
living and dieing
trying the unknown to survive
loosing pressure slowly
ending in a painful death
the unknown face
with the unknown touch
wil go on to another unknown.
Copyright ©
all4him
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2004-08-25 07:25:37]
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Re: Hidden Unknown Message
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by Twitch06 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:05:53 AM AEST
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i could relate to this poem, cuase i have just lost the guy that i loved too. but once you love someone, you will love them forever, wheater its friends or not, you will still have something for him within you.
~Kristen |
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Re: Hidden Unknown Message
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by deemanizer on
Saturday, 26th February 2011 @ 12:36:13 AM AEST
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| at an unknown time i read your unknown poem and am know plagued with an unknown feeling to post an unknown comment and say i liked it... |
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