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Demon Alcohol
Contributed by
TheRavenousOne
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:03:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The rum
The whiskey
The vodka
The beer
Its the demon alcohol
The late nights
The harsh fights
The big frights
Its the demon alcohol
The abuse
The neglect
The yelling
The disrespect
Its the demon alcohol
The beating
The bruises
The tempers
The short fuses
Its the demon alcohol
The no show
The lowest of lows
The bad breath
The near death
Its the demon alcohol
The mind games
The untamed
The insane
Its the demon alcohol
The mother
The father
The son
The daughter
Its the demon alcohol
The demons
The alcohol
The life
The fall
Its the demon alcohol
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2004-08-25 10:03:27]
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Re: Demon Alcohol
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:10:10 AM AEST
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i used to have an addiction to alcohol, I only drink 2 sometimes 3 times a week now, but I do still crave it alot more, alcohol can be the biggest demon known to humans.. a great write on how damaging it can be.....
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Re: Demon Alcohol
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:23:48 PM AEST
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Honest and truthful write. The title of this poem caught my attention. Both of my parents are alcoholic and it is so tough to live with them and frogive and learn to love. I have my own addiction to cocaine and my older brothers are druggies. The drug abuse all starts in the home. Keep writing.
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Re: Demon Alcohol
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:53:17 PM AEST
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so true...alcohol screws with the mind...hurts you and other...its a horrible thing to watch happen to someone in front of you...my unlce was a mean alcoholic...thank go dhe stopped drinking!
great peom
please comment on my work too
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