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Sunrise-Sunset
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:01:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The morning sun glows with a brilliant ray
of light peircing dark to start a new day
as it starts at the hills and flows down to the plains
it washes away the depression left by the rains
rolling over mountain tops
stretching the light to where it never stops
crossing seas and oceans galore
making the world shine like never before
finally vanishing behind the tree line
stoping the last few moments it shines
Turning the clouds into a golden brown
then times up and the sun goes down
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Dragontear27
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2004-08-25 14:01:45]
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Re: Sunrise-Sunset
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by DarkFey on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:42:10 PM AEST
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| This was so lovely painted a beautiful picture. Great imagery and great write!! DarkFey |
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Re: Sunrise-Sunset
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:42:46 PM AEST
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very pretty and lighthearted, well done:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sunrise-Sunset
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:57:43 PM AEST
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beautiful! it made me smile! I needed that...thank you...such a beautiful picture you've painted in my mind...great job
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Re: Sunrise-Sunset
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:07:04 PM AEST
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I quite enjoyed this... I don't know what it is about a sunset that makes me stop and think about my life...... Wish I could say the same about sunrise, but I'm never up...
A great poem...
Jaime |
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Re: Sunrise-Sunset
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:06:10 PM AEST
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| excellent imagery!! This must be a special person if such beautiful scenes make you think of them |
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