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Smiled
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You saw me from across the room
And came and introduced yourself
I loved the way your eyes smiled
Later on you taught me to dance
Your style, country style, two-step
We twirled and dipped and I smiled
We talked and walked and got to know
Each others past and future plans
We laughed and joked and smiled
You're the kind of guy I'm looking for
Sweet and sensitive and strong
When I was around you my soul smiled
But later I was out on the balcony
You had your arms around my sister
She did something she hasn't in awhile - smiled
She doesn't know, and neither do you
How much I like you, so I'm begging you -
Whatever you do - make her smile...
~Jaime Moran~
August 22, 2004
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2004-08-25 15:37:35]
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Re: Smiled
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:35:38 PM AEST
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That is the true devotion of a sister. A fabulous write, Jaime. I hope your sister still smiles. I hope you too have found something to smile about as well.
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Re: Smiled
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:41:14 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful..and so unselfish of you.... Loved this...
Jenni |
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Re: Smiled
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 06:10:24 PM AEST
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*is almost sniffly*
I absolutely love this . . . it's just perfect. Among the best poems about familial love I've ever seen . . . I can't say enough how much I loved this poem. Beautifully done :).
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Re: Smiled
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:43:20 PM AEST
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That is SO cute!!!! And so sweet. Such a nice write, it just kind of left me feeling happy... very touching. :)
~ Dee |
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Re: Smiled
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:24:50 AM AEST
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Oh, I agree with the other comments here. This is very touching. It really is nice to read something like this without finding any bitterness or anger in it. Your sister is lucky to have you!
Wishing you smiles,
SNM
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Re: Smiled
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by Archie on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:44:05 PM AEST
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| Your ending surprised me. I like this poem alot for all its uses of that word (smile) |
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Re: Smiled
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:30:11 AM AEST
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Awww!!!! The b*stard! But damn girl, thats alotta love you have for your sister. She's lucky to have you and I hope she knows that. Love ya sis, you'll find *him* if you haven't already, and he had better treat you right.
Hugs 'n Love
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