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~Prey~
Contributed by
DarkFey
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:32:20 PM in AEST
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It is the 13th year and we all sit and wait,
Wondering if the prey is enough to keep it at
bay.
She was a lovely young girl and now her mother
cries in vain. Knowing it was her turn to give
her heart away.
It is the horror that all families in the Town of
Reed must pay. When the monster comes he must feed
then return to his watery grave.
We owe him that much at least thats what they say.
For the death of innocent man in such a horrible way.
I hope to know the whole story some day.
But for now, here I lay. Wondering did she scream at
the sight of his face, or did he show mercy and kill
without haste?
I hope for her it ended that way and think of the fate
of my own children. I will have someday...
Copyright ©
DarkFey
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2004-08-25 16:32:20]
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Re: ~Prey~
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:43:30 PM AEST
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>>> Shivers ... Wow, I too hope to know the whole story some day ... that definately leaves many unanswered questions and sets up a fantistic avenue for future writes ... a great hook
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Re: ~Prey~
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:45:16 PM AEST
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| great write. kind of reminds me of some old stories ive heard. =] |
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Re: ~Prey~
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:13:51 PM AEST
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great write....i liked it
Lots of Love
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Re: ~Prey~
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by pvd on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:39:28 PM AEST
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Chills of the unkown. Will you continue like Vengence?
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Re: ~Prey~
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by pixie on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:58:12 PM AEST
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a chilling dark write, great job,
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