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night not light
Contributed by
LilGrlFeelingAlone
on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 06:46:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see the daylight
But I want night
Im tired of this fight
Youre never right
Day makes me cry
And want to die
U stair in my eyes
I silently say my goodbyes
How do you know my fears?
But can see my tears
U dont understand dear
I dont want to be here
You look for someone to blame
Always wanting the fame
Cheating on lifes game
Now thats a shame!
I always go numb
When around you come
You make me feel dumb
I just bite my tongue instead of the gum
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2004-08-25 18:46:00]
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Re: night not light
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 07:52:59 PM AEST
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| great and very interesting write. keep up the good work =] |
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Re: night not light
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 06:20:16 PM AEST
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This was very dark,,But I like how you worked it all..It kept my intrest...
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