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Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:01:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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Its an unusual rainy morning
From my window I look out
I wonder if the sun will shine
In my mind I have a doubt
The skies are all of gray
While darker in the far
The streets are all empty
Not even a sign of a car
I sit here slipping coffee
As my mind starts to wonder
I become lost in a trance
As I rise above the thunder
Racing are the memories
That flood from my soul
Of loved one who passed on
That left me far from hole
Precious people in my life
Gone before their time
To me it makes no sense
No reason and no rhyme
With a crack of the lighting
I come back to my senses
Yet the pain in my heart
Still has me feeling defensive
Then I thought to myself
Could the rain just be tears?
That have fallen from our loved ones
And build up through the years?
But how could heaven be a happy place?
If they could look down on my eyes
And see the tears as they fall
And my endless thoughts of why
How could they not feel the pain?
When they look upon my face
If the rain isnt their tears
Than heaven must be a wonderful place
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2004-08-25 20:01:31]
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Re: Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:32:45 PM AEST
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| that was an amazing write. very emotional and deep. |
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Re: Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:14:01 PM AEST
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| For emotional yet beautiful! Christina |
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Re: Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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by Kie on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:27:05 AM AEST
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This is one of those poems sure to be a classic by the masses. It is beautiful, sad, touching, emotional and highlights bereavement.
I just loved this so poem so very much.
Kie |
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Re: Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:22:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful so very touching....... tears clouding my eyes for this touched my heart so lovely
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:36:54 AM AEST
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Wow!
Another heavenly awesome masterpeice!
luv, huggs, heaven,
emy |
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Re: Heaven Must Be A Wonderful Place
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:27:44 PM AEST
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Awwww I dunno how I missed this one!! Such a touching piece, Jeff... It's awesome.....
You write with such emotions it moves me everytime.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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