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This morning
Contributed by
artostuff
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:20:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Silver coated paths Reflective wet drops of silt wrapping for today.
Copyright ©
artostuff
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2004-08-26 03:20:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: This morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by artostuff on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:33:44 PM AEST (User
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I didn't mention in the blurb, this was my first attempt at a haiku, comments are welcome. Thank you. |
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Re: This morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:42:42 PM AEST (User
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I think you did very well. I love haiku and this is very nice.
Rita |
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Re: This morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:23:00 PM AEST (User
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very nice. i always love ones that follow the haiku rules =] |
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