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Freedom is Foreign
Contributed by
liquidchaos
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Holding on to static cause it's all we have now.
Running in circles with no exit in sight.
And it's funny how this lack of control can make your ears bleed.
Rub on the alcohol and keep your blood from clotting.
We're still living where we don't want to be.
Everyone speaks a different language and I can't understand.
The sound of your voice is soothing but you're not here,
No, you're never here.
Whine and complain all you want now
But tomorrow the sun will rise again
To greet the same old mess of selfishness.
They said to me "You made your choices,
And we hate what you've become."
But I can't change and I won't conform.
Freedom is foreign and I can tell I'm alone.
The wounds have healed, but the scars remain.
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liquidchaos
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2004-08-26 09:57:26]
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Re: Freedom is Foreign
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by LiquidChaos on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:44:55 AM AEST
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Re: Freedom is Foreign
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:42:22 AM AEST
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I really like the ending. The wounds have healed but the scars remain.
That is so true.
Blu |
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Re: Freedom is Foreign
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by rubytears on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:51:30 AM AEST
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u've got it and keep riteing its awesome.
luvs and kisses |
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