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No need to be suicidal.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 12:31:05 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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Im sitting frozen. Nothing to do. I feel suicidal, But I wont go on the roof. Wheres the use?
Wheres the point in doing it? When so many want me dead? They always start at me in school, Giving out their threats.
I need to sleep, Coz Im REALLY tired. But I can NEVER sleep right, Because my heads so on fire.
If Jason were her, Id proberly talk to him. Only hes not! HE WORKS ON A DIFFERENT SHIFT!
So where am I to go now? I have to be some where. Im writing in the library now, But theres so much noise in here!
Im feeling SUICIDAL! But dont worry, I wont die. Coz Im wanted dead by so many, That I really cant see a point
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Re: No need to be suicidal.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jolly on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 12:58:04 PM AEST (User
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I feel your pain..I'm often suicidal. You have a gift to let others see inside you, which is rare...too often we hold back...and you don't. Thats what makes a great poet or writer of any kind. Don't be afraid to let others feel what you're feeling...The only thing I would work to improve is spelling..or typos...Sometimes I have very personal feelings and I want to hold them in...maybe about a love I feel...whataever...I'm learning that it's those feelings and the words that express them that make writing great...I can see you've already learned that...Keep up the great work. Don't let anyone get you down...(mary.) I'm also a_bear, btw |
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