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Daddy and Ice
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 08:59:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you sneak around with that girl
that you so call " a friend "
you and mommy arent in love anymore
but still you pretend
now you have your new biker friends
going out for a drink
when no one is around you drive your fists into my face
but now i know what causes you to be this way
i will always hate you
I want to watch you die
watch you rot
with my anger still burning inside
we used to be so happy
the perfect family
but now were in pieces
daddy i hat your ***** ice
i hate your ***** face
i want to watch you die slowly
painfully
i want to see dark red blood gush from your wounds
while i laugh hystarically at your helpless body
i will rip off your limbs
and burry them in the desert
by the time the police find them
they will be to decayed for them to identify that it was you
daddy i want you to know what you addiction has done to this family
daddy
daddy
daddy
i hate you
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Re: Daddy and Ice
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by jonbalser on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:15:57 PM AEST
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| dang, that was strong words, but very good, i did like it |
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Re: Daddy and Ice
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by jonbalser on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:16:17 PM AEST
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| dang, that was strong words, but very good, i did like it |
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Re: Daddy and Ice
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 10:24:10 PM AEST
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man that is so sad!
if you ever need to talk let me know
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Daddy and Ice
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:17:40 PM AEST
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| Wow. That was really powerful. You wrote it quite well. I could really feel your anger pulsing in my viens. I know saying sorry doesn't make it any better, but I am. But you have an amazing talent. That's something he can never take away from you. |
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Re: Daddy and Ice
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by poetic_ire on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:28:39 PM AEST
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Wow. Ash.. ::blinks::
You wrote this after he did something or said something. ::sighs::
I'm going to write you really quick. |
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