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Is there room for 2 in your watery grave?
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:01:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart's gone cold
since you've disappeared.
Now I need your love to fill it.
Make my chest fill with life,
with your stale dead breath.
All I want to do is share your
watery grave with you forever.
All I have are memories of you,
and memories of us,
being ripped from me.
Why did you leave me?
How could you jump?
My tears fall in
tragic drops,
each calling your precious name.
But you do not rise.
I don't feel your
warm fingers brush away my sorrows.
Give to me the kiss of death,
our last and first beautiful passion.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-08-26 23:01:39]
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Re: Is there room for 2 in your watery grave?
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:48:34 PM AEST
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so tragic! you did a great job though!
please comment on my work too
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Re: Is there room for 2 in your watery grave?
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by jeannoh on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:14:39 AM AEST
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This is a fantastic poem
I like your use of words
carefully thoght out
Lots of emotion
very good write
I would love to read more
of your work
thanks
Jeannoh |
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Re: Is there room for 2 in your watery grave?
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by theMoth on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:48:23 PM AEST
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Here I am reading
the least read poem
of a fellow poet,
and once again
finding
an excellent
poetic expression.
This is good stuff!
--Mothy |
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