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bad displeased woman
Contributed by
cauchy3
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Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:54:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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bad displeased woman
------To whom offend me on web-----
Her minds are pink her dresses are down
Name in belts and face in bands
Whistles of wolves to young in town
Pay for whistles she lost her stands
Toes are silver hearts are old
Nellie is weak minds of coppers
Skeans are smart and that stumble is horse
The legs of stockings are pale in hole
Hire her coat from whore in shops
Puffed looks cover her shorts
The ball is bauble of rascal gangs
She opens all her needs in ball
Carved the bills to love agents
She has deep pains in her ages
The fault is on night not in darks
Cartoons on strips are stripper s arts
Only she is the unaware dancer
She must earn the shifts in lives
Coins are returned in shilly-shally
She gives all to gear the riffles
Shear hairs and cut ruffs
Soft in core and hard in surfaces
Signals of innate old whores
One s who but who s who
Dark reside in her heart
Pennies are shinning on beams
She goes down one stair
Gratitude to sons of two Harry
Sing a song of goodness in vain
Glees are rhythms blue in plains
Loves are sick but moneys are lack
Kudo in judo to twist the angel
Lift her shoes silly on turners
For coins never too shy or prude
Turning points for her good stocks
Sexes are null and loves deform
With bucks her body has net.(weight)
Internal but not external little dews
Absorbed by leafs that are yellow
Hips are wreaked but have low pulls
-------Revenge by Cheung shun sang=cauchy3-------
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Re: bad displeased woman
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by pvd on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:43:17 AM AEST
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I guess you are seeking poetic justice with this interesting write.
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Re: bad displeased woman
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:41:20 PM AEST
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| I agree with PVD |
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Re: bad displeased woman
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by happykelly on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:29:28 AM AEST
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| this is a very good poem... it reminds me of my mother |
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Re: bad displeased woman
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by Belcha on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:21:00 AM AEST
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clazy, absowutly clazy !!
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