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Good bye Sbohem
Contributed by
Aika
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Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Salty crystals
From my eyes
Are left now
I am standing here
Like an old tree
Bent and doddered
Heart like glass
So easily fused
In the desert of dreams
Only web gauzy
Keeps rest of body
Together
This rain
Will never again
Revive
Little one,
Youre dying now,
So good bye.
Krystaly soli
U jenom zbyly
Z mch slz
Jako strom star
Such a ohnut
Stojm tu
Srdce jako sklo
V ru se rozteklo
V pouti snů
Jen pavučina tenk
Dr zbytek těla
Pohromadě
Tenhle dť
U nestihne
Znovu vzkřsit
Maličk,
Umr,
Tak sbohem
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-08-27 15:08:43]
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Re: Good bye Sbohem
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:47:41 PM AEST
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so very sad but a beautiful write
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Re: Good bye Sbohem
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 06:50:12 PM AEST
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ohhhh so sad............... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Good bye Sbohem
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:44:15 PM AEST
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Sadness and pain bound together in this.How poignant that you use the word "goodbye", since knowing you as I do I know its not a word you like to use, that word of finality.I hope it really isn't goodbye from that little girl
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Re: Good bye Sbohem
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 08:31:44 PM AEST
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Oh My Aika, this is truly heart breaking....
I'm not sure whom you mean by this write,
I only pray that it's not you and you are going to be all right!
Does this mean you are saying goodbye to us your poets and friends?
Please let me know dear.....I fear.
Can't image coming to YPDC and not find you here?
Love you....beautiful, sad, resigned write
hugs
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